Hi its me again Olpmcc,
At the beginning of the school year, I wrote a paragraph blog post about how I felt about wearing masks. Recently I wrote another paragraph blog post about Minecraft being included in the school curriculum. I know I wrote a better paragraph on the Minecraft subject because I put more effort into transition words, introduction and concluding sentence unlike my initial paragraph on masks. I also enjoyed writing the Minecraft paragraph more because its interesting to write about. Since the mask paragraph was written earlier in the year my writing skills have improved.
Thank you for reading.